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    Hey - looking for some feedback for my site.
    Thanks
    Woodbury, MN Lawn Care

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    Quickly browsed your site. Just a couple things I noticed:

    1) First thing I noticed was the estimate request link on your homepage....great idea, not sure why others don't do the same thing.

    2) "Four Seasons Outdoor Services provides affordable specialist garden and landscaping services."

    Specialist? I tend to think 'specialized' flows better. Consider omitting the word "garden." Perhaps revise to either 'lawn and landscaping services' or just simply 'landscape services.'

    3) The picture page, dude up in bucket sawing limb. No hard hat, no fall protection, and no eye protection(?) - just haphazard operation. OSHA would have a field day! Portrayed a scrub-like image of your tree services to me. :alien::alien::alien:
    2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 and future 2015 LSF RECEPTED AWARD recipient!

    Hortikulture Kolledge Grad + Licensed Master Irrigator + Certified Backflow Technician +
    Licensed Fert & Squirt Applicator = Jack of all trades, master of none.

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    • #3
      Originally posted by MASTERMOWER View Post
      Quickly browsed your site. Just a couple things I noticed:

      1) First thing I noticed was the estimate request link on your homepage....great idea, not sure why others don't do the same thing.

      2) "Four Seasons Outdoor Services provides affordable specialist garden and landscaping services."

      Specialist? I tend to think 'specialized' flows better. Consider omitting the word "garden." Perhaps revise to either 'lawn and landscaping services' or just simply 'landscape services.'

      3) The picture page, dude up in bucket sawing limb. No hard hat, no fall protection, and no eye protection(?) - just haphazard operation. OSHA would have a field day! Portrayed a scrub-like image of your tree services to me. :alien::alien::alien:
      i agree, the picture page is a disaster, you got guys chipping without ppe's, dog sitting in machine bucket, guys standing around looking at felled tree.
      equipment only works well in photo's if the equipment looks sharp and you have a man lift being used as a bucket and it looks fly by night.

      none of your photo's would say or prove to a prospective client that you are worthy.

      other then a few typo's its pretty good foundation for you. but i agree with mastermower that i like the estimate link and overall it is not too bad and i would lose the photos and maybe put in some before and after shots with no equipment or workers in the pic.

      i am not knocking you and i think you did good you just need to tighten it up a little and i would rather come off sounding harsh then be polite to spare you the embarassment.

      web sites are great medians but you have merely seconds to keep that person reading and coming back for more and thats why its about quality and being straight to the point and giving them information and once they see something they don't like they hit that back button and its lights out for you.

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      • #4
        nice page y dont we do some linking to get some seo
        lawn service Miami

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        • #5
          You might consider adding some pictures to the testimonials. While quoting someone is convincing and all, an image to go with the face is that much more convincing.

          Plus, people tend to react well to images. Add some pictures of your work continually. And if you really want to try hard to get your website ranked high in Google and other search engines, add a blog to it and add new content consistently and frequently.

          *edit:

          just saw the sample pictures page, after reading what dpld said.. i agree with dpld. Only add pictures that will benefit a viewer. Maybe only include finished or refined work. Random pictures of random people are not what people want to find on a landscape site.

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