Is this ad ok? reply asap

[Tmiller72]

I'm placing a classified ad today that goes like this:

Miller's Lawn Care- mowing, trimming, cleanup & other general yard work. Reasonable & Reliable. Call Tommy at ###-###-####.

I'm gonna run that in 2 papers that come out once a week and put a bold box around the ad. Is this ad seem ok? I have to have this in by this afternoon.

thanks

tommy

[parkside]

sounds good to me I generally state that I do lawn and garden maintenance.

Hope this helps. good luck this season.

[Tmiller72]

sounds good to me I generally state that I do lawn and garden maintenance.

Hope this helps. good luck this season.

Thanks for the reply.

[Phil Nilsson]

TMiller ... on right track ... you have some benefits listed but suggest make them "stronger" ...

... read this http://www.lawnserviceforum.com/showthread.php?t=11295

[Team Gopher]

Hi Tmiller72,

One other thing you could consider is put the services & benefits at the top and your company name & number at the bottom. That may help grab the readers attention.